tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post5366449863603764421..comments2023-10-30T04:22:31.056-07:00Comments on Blue Wren: Almost 3000 words: Spirit WalkWrenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09285813981508179421noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post-10968227689694808182009-07-18T20:19:01.572-07:002009-07-18T20:19:01.572-07:00A very enjoyable read, Wren. Trying to get into t...A very enjoyable read, Wren. Trying to get into the mindset of a different culture is usually difficult. From the limited contacts that I have had with Native Americans, I think your depiction is as close as any that I have read other than those written by a native.<br /><br />Keep up the good work.dorkinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post-69124698583096162622009-07-18T14:43:57.960-07:002009-07-18T14:43:57.960-07:00Thanks for the good observation, Bill. This was wr...Thanks for the good observation, Bill. This was written as a self-imposed exercise, searching for voice and style, with the goal of perhaps publishing a finished story as a novel. The audience - adults.Wrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09285813981508179421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post-49446683768758929042009-07-18T11:01:10.743-07:002009-07-18T11:01:10.743-07:00There are reasons why we do things and context is ...There are reasons why we do things and context is also important.<br /><br />I enjoyed reading your words and would like to see more of the story - but I also was left with questions - mostly about the intention, purpose and why this was written.<br /><br />Was it for publishing purposes?<br />Written for a certain age demographic?<br />Was it done as an exercise?<br />For a class?<br />The goal is short story or novel?<br />Something else?<br /><br />I say this because each reader will look at the story with different eyes when reacting to your question, of, "what you think".willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15590217997145761582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post-55523925529221529982009-07-18T08:44:48.104-07:002009-07-18T08:44:48.104-07:00Thanks, Bubs! :o)Thanks, Bubs! :o)Wrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09285813981508179421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25499814.post-10849453724907915132009-07-18T07:59:48.309-07:002009-07-18T07:59:48.309-07:00I felt like that kid was sitting right in front of...I felt like that kid was sitting right in front of me, talking to me that whole time. Good job!Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09747874295331152779noreply@blogger.com